Post by struggle on Nov 17, 2014 15:11:04 GMT
first things first... english is not my native language but i'm trying to write a poem for an english friend of mine but i'm not sure if the words i'm using are proper english, help would be very appreciated... thanks in advance...so here's the poem
Once just a dream two people shared
offspring of a love declared
a magic moment here on earth
a miracle for what it's worth
a daring truth,a truthful dare
the date was due (to)
a dream come true
your day of birth
a day of mirth
for everyone around you.
the year is drawing to an end
it's time remembering a friend
and celebrate your special day
considering you will not stay
'cause who's got so much time to spend.
Wish you colorful flowers
sweet chocolate and hours
of joy and delight
and a future so bright
like the sun after showers.
Once just a dream two people shared
offspring of a love declared
a magic moment here on earth
a miracle for what it's worth
a daring truth,a truthful dare
the date was due (to)
a dream come true
your day of birth
a day of mirth
for everyone around you.
the year is drawing to an end
it's time remembering a friend
and celebrate your special day
considering you will not stay
'cause who's got so much time to spend.
Wish you colorful flowers
sweet chocolate and hours
of joy and delight
and a future so bright
like the sun after showers.
hello
